Name: Li Lei Age:14

Likes: basketball, swimming, drawing, music

Favorite star: Michael Jordan

Favorite food: fish and chips

Appearance: short and straight hair, big eyes, medium, height

Wants: a basketball player

I have a good friend,

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答案

I have a good friend. His name is Li Lei. He is 14 years old. He is of medium build and of medium height. He has short straight black hair. And he has two big eyes. He likes playing basketball, swimming and drawing. He also likes listening to music. His favorite food is fish and chips. His favorite star is Michael Jordan. And he wants to be a basketball player like Jordan.

解析

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的好朋友李雷。写前要认真审题，不要漏掉任何信息，叙述顺序可根据需要作相应的调整。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了好友李雷的外貌特征，接下来介绍他的爱好，最后介绍他的理想，把Favorite star: Michael Jordan 与Wants: a basketball player结合在一起介绍，更显得比较条理。